Zoe Cannell is the sixth Manx bard. Here she shares a poem and explains what led her to write it
I am regularly asked if poetry always needs to rhyme - a popular question, particularly from children.
The Third Manx Bard, John-Dog Collister, and I take a similar stance that poetry should rhyme and have metre, because I believe that’s where a lot of the skill and creativity lies. Performance poetry allows for slightly less rigidity, as its important elements are interpretation, emotion and delivery.
The nation’s most beloved and well-known poems, ’If’, ’I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud’, ’The Listeners’ and ’The Lady of Shallot’ do rhyme and have established metre, and there is no escaping that.
Of course, there is a place for non-rhyming poetry. However, for me personally, this is niche. When writing in this style, it is easy to swiftly freefall abstract ideas, often in a natural fashion.
For me, I consider my target audience. Who is going to read this poetry or hear it?
Will they enjoy it or appreciate it? Will it deliver a message or provoke reaction?
A vital element of writing poetry (or anything) is expressing oneself in a way one enjoys and feels comfortable with.
Conformity in art is never necessary, otherwise there would be no progress.
Hence why, this month, I’ve had a stab at a slightly different style from my usual, as I look at the general mess that Covid-19 has left behind.
I am passionate about the (poor) state of the Isle of Man and it could, one day, be enough for me to stand for the House of Keys.
I am hopeful that after this current phase ends, I will be able to spend my last few months in my Manx Bard role wisely and effectively.
I have had disappointments during my tenure with three lockdowns, but now have engagements in my diary, all of which I am greatly looking forward to.
I have a handful of other plans, which I must work to bring to fruition.
I have also spent time writing a few personal poems for people who I feel have served our island well, or who have helped and supported me.
It is always a joy and privilege to pay tribute to people I admire, and causes dear to my heart.
Locked down, locked away, locked within
a twelvemonth plight not invited in
Time as a treadmill; trekking odysseys
Sailing with stealth across stormy seas
Wearily wading in wellies, we quash quagmires of this quandary
Man meanders, mettles the mud,
heavy-heart, heavy-foot on Covid crud
Predicament duels with the Academic
Swordplay rules? Joust joust joust pandemic
Life on pause, don’t Rest in Greece,
life in the slow lane, speed decrease
As we clasp crustaceans; dare we peep?
Claws clamp again? This crab won’t sleep
Dirt by dogs; owners idle. Why? Unjustified
Feckless, reckless, sullying idyll countryside
Spoil it. Dog toilet. Shift it! Just lift it!
Dread of a tread, so down fix your eyes;
wish not for the squish of stinking surprise
Bag? Pocket, pack it. Carry it, and the worth
and responsibility; the honour respecting our Earth
Home-turf conditions - lifeless; pride-less
Grab a Saturn-sized hoover to vacuum the mess
Gungy, grungy and grimily grim
The fringe of this Isle needs a bold barber’s trim
Pavements: spattered and jagged and tattered
Roads: battered and ragged and shattered
A driving adventure for the soulless soulâ?¦
Streets are faded, jaded; took its toll
Trash around, waste-ground, fly-tipping
drops blots on nature’s page. So stop the dripping
As we weather together huge global mess,
we must razzle and rise to rebuild our success



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